Let's take a look!
Leah
Could have used more b-roll and a title slide, and it ran too long
Amber
A tripod would be nice. No matter how steady you think you can hold a camera, it will look shaky without a tripod.
Bella
Good use of captioning. See how much better the shot is with a tripod?
Nourhan
Nice back-and-forth interviews. But, tripod! And b-roll!
Nick
The audio is a bit uneven. Try to get the mics as close as you can to the subject.
Matt
Again, mic + distance = lousy audio
Carly
Better audio. Good thing you asked Brytanie how she spells her first name. Watch your editing at the end; the last sound byte gets cut off.
Stephen
B-roll was wise to use between segments, but would also have been helpful amid segments, too, to break up that constant head shot of your interview subject.
Brytanie
Good tight head shots, but needs more b-roll
Alex
Good audio; good b-roll but needs more b-roll.
Shelby
Under copyright law, you can't use copyrighted music without expressed written permission of the author. It's not enough to credit it. (Same with pictures.) So, no fatal, but you do get a federal lawsuit.
Angelica O.
Ambitious interviewing: you interviewed a FORMER student, too!
Danielle
Captions when we first introduced interview subjects would have been helpful.
Alyssa
Nice interviews, but a lack of b-roll.
Liam
Ditto
Tia
Fun opening b-roll!
Cait
Unfortunately, a fatal: be sure to double-check name-spellings!
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