I've been very focused on you all doing basic journalism: a to-the-point lede, a strong nut graf, frequent attribution, and so forth.
But the goal isn't to write basic stories with basic ledes; it's to use the qualities of structure, simple and direct language, attribution and such to then reinstall creativity to our writing, so that we have something that is both fun to read AND fun to write; something that is engaging in style yet solid in journalistic principles.
I think this story -- and its alternate lede -- does a good job of marrying fundamentals and a fun-to-read style. Note how it's not creativity for creativity's sake; it's an artistic style entirely rooted in the facts you're trying to emphasize:
It’s
the device that changed the lives of many people.
It has become the go-to for information
regarding the news, weather, research, latest celebrity gossip and much, much
more.
What is it?
It’s the computer.
There has been a dramatic growth of
computer ownership and Internet use in American households from the early 1980s
until now, according to a survey conducted by the U.S. Census Bureau.
The U.S. Census Bureau conducted the
survey as part of the Current Population Survey (CPS) on household computer ownership
and Internet use by Americans.
The CPS is a large nationally
representative survey of approximately 50,000 households conducted each month
by the U.S. Census Bureau; this particular survey was conducted in October,
said the survey.
The survey shows that since the early
1980s when computers first entered households, the number of households owning
a computer has increased from 8.2 percent to 61.8 percent of 113.1 million
American households.
According to the survey, of the 61.8
percent of households with computers, 54.7 percent access the Internet from
home.
“Today, more than 76 percent of children
ages 3 to 17 have access to a computer, as do 57 percent of all adults ages
18+,” said the survey.
Although computers and the Internet are
becoming popular in the majority of American households, they aren’t for
everyone.
According to the survey, of the 45.3
percent of households that don’t access the Internet but have computers, have a
variety of reasons given for not connecting to the Internet.
A few main reasons given were having
computers that are inadequate to access the Internet, people who felt they
don’t need the Internet or weren’t interested in it, and the cost of the
Internet was too high, said the survey.
The survey also said that many people
don’t access the Internet because of a lack of time, lack of skill, language
barriers, privacy and security concerns, and concerns about children accessing
questionable material on the Internet.
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