Unfortunately, we had a fatal on this exercise: one of you reported Police Chief Barry Kopperud spotted the carjacked SUV in a Chinese restaurant parking lot. In fact, Kopperud said police officers spotted the SUV, not Kopperud himself.
And that's a fatal. Sorry, folks, but it is.
Please, make sure in the prewriting process that you are studying your information thoroughly enough to understand the sequence of events and who said or did what, and then after writing double-check your work to make sure that what you wrote is both what you intended to write, and that it lines up with the facts perfectly.
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