Yep, some of you fataled. Good thing for you it wasn't a graded assignment. Let's count the ways you had a fatal day:
You misspelled names.
One of the fastest ways you can fatal. Like here:
Who is responsible: the patron or the lifeguard? Erick Barsh is suing the city for injuries resulting from being hit by lightning during a storm last summer while in the city pool.
Nice lede, except for the fact it is Erik, not Erick. Double-check names, addresses, ages, locations, everything!
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