... Layoux was alone in the store? Were you there with him (in which case he wasn't alone)?
No. You know it because he told you. So it's Layoux said he was alone in the store.
How do you know Layoux was fired from his job? Did you can him?
No. You know it because he told you. So it's Layoux said he was fired by store management.
Don't ignore attribution. Every graf in the body of the story, every time.
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