Did you need to cite the store's specific street address? Isn't that a basic and helpful identifier of WHERE this happened?
Wouldn't people wonder WHERE? Whether this was near their home? Or was the store they go to?
The
lede probably wasn't a good place for that -- a first
attribution simply as a Haslett convenience store, or a local O-Mart
store would have been fine -- but an address with a subsequent
attribution would have been helpful.
I'm just sayin'.
No comments:
Post a Comment