Very impressed with your latest round of work, especially regarding the meeting exercise. Lots of well-organized stories, specific ledes, developed nut grafs and liberal use of good supporting quotes throughout.
Not everything was perfect. We had a few fatals. But the rate seems to be going down. Still some AP Style errors, so let's keep noting 'em. Your sentence structures and word uses can be polished a bit, but you're not bad right now. I feel like we're on track to get to where we want to be by the end of the semester.
So let's dive in and see what you did.
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