JRN 200 is fun!
Where else would you rather be than right here, right now? Besides Hawaii?
Monday, October 8, 2012
Murder: Do You Need To Say ...
... 9 a.m. yesterday morning?
No. You already said
a.m.
, so adding
morning
is redundant.
All you need to say is 9 a.m. yesterday.
Look for redundancies and un-redundantify your copy!
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