Did you need to cite the store's specific street address? Isn't that a basic and helpful identifier of WHERE this happened?
Wouldn't people wonder WHERE? Whether this was near their home? Or was the store they go to?
The
lede probably won't have been a good place for that -- a first
attribution simply as a Haslett convenience store, or a local O-Mart
store would have been fine -- but an address with a subsequent
attribution would have been helpful.
I'm just sayin'.
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