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Monday, October 11, 2010
Robbery -- Who, What, When, WHERE, Why . . .
Did you need to cite the store's street address? Isn't that a basic and helpful identifier of WHERE this happened?
Wouldn't people wonder WHERE? Whether this was near their home? Or was the store they go to?
I'm just sayin'.
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